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Post by Jinchu on Tue Oct 30, 2012 12:50 am

___________ Jinchu Sonov Raizen ___________






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"I refuse to run, I refuse to submit, I refuse to die"



Nickname(s): None earned
Age: 17
Sex: Male
Birthday: 9/April/X874
Sexuality: Straight
Affiliation: Presumed Neutral Mage
Rank: D

Guild: Rogue
Guild Tattoo: Black, placed on his back, between the shoulder blades


Physical Characteristics:
Jinchu has a kind but daring look about him. His hair is a fiery red, mid length and has an edge to it. He has a relatively even skin tone, a bit pale without much tanning ability. Most females would consider him to have an attractive complexion but it is more often to hear "he's cute" by girls who are around his age but think he would be younger. His eyes contrast rather nicely with his hair, giving them both a bit of extra intensity. They usually hold a kind gaze, the green showing through his bangs without much difficulty. In most cases Jin's face will carry a constant pleasantness about it unless he is angry. When in an angry state his hair will seem a little more flame-like and his eyes will almost look like a serpent's, giving him an all-around threatening stare.

Jinchu has a fairly muscular build, very defined and athletic which gives him the source of his physical prowess. Before mastering his magic he primarily used hand to hand combat as his signature. Even being muscular Jin isn't someone very large or bulky by any means. He is mostly leaner in his muscle mass, more focused on density. This physique makes him not as strong in basic brute strength but a faster fighter compared to the general fighter. He weighs about 160 lbs and is 5'10".

Attire/Clothing:
Jin has a specific style he likes to sport. He wears a red overcoat over a generic black undershirt. The coat is quite unique, having a very wide and tall collar. When looking straight on it obscures up to his upper lip and down of his face, made to look a little mysterious and conservative. The trim of the coat is a golden yellow for flare and has short sleeves that end just passed the shoulders. The collar is connected all the way around, tied together with a thick black string. It runs down conjoined front and center until it gets to his waist, splitting off to the sides and ending. Meanwhile down the back end the coat keeps going down, splitting off at his waist and each part continues to reach down to about the back of his knees or a bit lower. The undershirt he wears has long sleeves, sprouting out from the short-sleeved coat, skin tight and stretchy (like under armor) all the way down to the inside of his gloves.

Abnormalities: N/A


Personality:
Intelligent:
Jin is not someone any would consider a fool. He expresses his intelligence most notably in the fact that he likes to use his words in a colourful amount of ways. He works very well with others that are on his level physically or mentally in combat and even remains a useful party when paired with someone at a higher power standpoint than himself. Jinchu’s tactical skills allow him to be able to use his own skills or manipulate a comrade's skills to a high proficiency and accomplish what is needed.
Defender:
He may be of a neutral legal standpoint and works by doing requests to make ends meet but in most cases he greatly prefers to be helping someone more because of their need than just what is in their pockets. Yes Jinchu does need to make a living but he does not wish to see innocent people to get hurt. There are potential situations where he puts a job on the back seat for the sake of protecting a person who is incapable of their own self-defence. This would have to be a legitimate case where their life is in danger or their purposes in life were in jeopardy. Of course he would only know if someone’s life was in true danger if he was notified beforehand or it was blatantly obvious. A situation that is that dire doesn't usually pop up but Jin will most especially not ignore that type of circumstance if he sees it.
Kind:
He likes to be kind and decent towards others, believing they deserve to be treated well because they had never done him wrong. Jinchu is a guy that likes to express his good heart among others with his actions, more generally liking to show that he cares. This part also is the reason that he has a temper with people that are mean-spirited or rude for no reason. It’s something he just can’t stand for being someone who is so genuine, himself.

Hobbies: Fighting, travelling, board games (from snakes and ladders to chess), dancing, singing (when travelling)

Likes:
Competing:
Being in the business of magic, Jinchu always wants to rise to the next level and surpass others on his way to the strongest mage in Fiore, then the world. This drive makes him love sparring with high ranked mages and even fighting ones that are universally considered out of his league just so he can gage himself by how much improvement is needed to get to the same class as these guys and what it will take to get there. Also knowing what certain people are better than him in specific areas interests him and determines his development greatly as well.
Observing:
To a certain degree Jinchu likes to watch people, seeing their reactions and behaviours in different situations. He developed this interest midway in his fighting life, when he noticed that different kind of fighters sport different combat styles. Learning the general structures of different styles with observation he discovered that using that knowledge one could better learn how to beat them. Naturally since he initially began it in a combat setting he more often uses it there than in normal day life. He still likes to apply it to average situations when he can but it is more fighting-oriented.
Friends:
Jinchu loves to make friends. From his roaming he has grown fond of meeting new people and experiencing new relationships. He primarily looks for those who are genuine like he is but can adapt to be friendly with different people. He likes to form bonds and be social with many that he comes across, spreading his name around for when he attempts to reach for the top.

Dislikes:
Bullies: A tough guy who picks on those who are much weaker than them is a coward and above all someone who holds little or no value in others’ skills. People that behave that way infuriate Jinchu because he loves seeing younger mages grow in strength and learn to fight their battles. When facing someone who exploits and messes with people because they don’t have the strength to fight back Jin can’t resist putting them in their place. In his mind, they asked for the punishment he gives them through their wrongdoing.
Traitors: People who can’t maintain their loyalties or tear down other members of their guild are worse than trash in Jinchu’s eyes. Once in a position where he discovers someone who does something that unforgivable, even if it has to do with other guilds, Jinchu becomes a monster until the time comes where he believes everything is set right. And in his heart he cannot forgive anyone who does such a traitorous act to their own guild because that is betraying their own family.
Being Bored: Being driven by his emotions Jinchu is unable to sit still without some sort of excitement, adventure, or fun for an extended period of time.

Inspiration:
Probably his most apparent motivation is his own desire to be the greatest mage. It means he will travel the world to prove his strength and will always have to prove it for when the next challenger comes. It is an ultimate and a truly never-ending adventure that only the greatest dreamers believe can be achieved. Facing all the different forms of magic and an even more colourful assortment of people is one of the greatest parts of it. He likes to think of the quote he heard from the dragon he met during his past journeys, 'Being the strongest dragon in the sky will mean taking all forms of creatures in many shapes and sizes.'

Seeing other dedicated mages really gets Jinchu going, he always feels the need to work harder than the next guy so encountering someone who shares that passion excites him. It usually affects him for a while too, even after departing from the person he was inspired by he will use them as a constant motivator to refer to for a time. With that fact he barely ever runs out of motivation to train and accomplish his dream.

Jinchu will always feel more in his parents’ debt than most kids and with good reason given his past. It will always be an underlying truth that part of his reason to become the strongest so his name will be known by even the heavens. If he can manage to do that he can finally tell his parents that he honoured their memory and lives the life he was gifted to the maximum. It is the only way he can thinking of letting them know how grateful he was to be their child.

Fears:
The only earthly things that Jinchu can't handle being close to are hairless rodents. Their small bones are visible through the skin and he finds them to be dirty and grimy. He can't function correctly if he sees them, he adopts some frantic behavior and needs to either kill it or vacate the area for fear of throwing up or developing a twitch. He hates them with a passion.

Jinchu is not a person who has many fears, he is the type of person that when he feels intimidated he knows that there's all the more reason to approach the challenge. The issue with this mindset he lives by makes him question whether he will become the strongest. Jinchu is scared of his own limits and his goal is to rid himself of them, or at least place them so high that no one else can force him there. What scares him more than anything is the chance that he won't be enough to reach the very top.

Sometimes Jinchu fears that he can get the people around him into a bit of trouble because of the antics that he can get himself involved in. He gets into a lot of fights with bullies and even with people he enjoys to be around. The nature of his magic makes it a bit dangerous for people around though, it takes a lot of control to keep it restrained.


Augment Name: Free Running
Augment Description: With all of Jinchu's athleticism and natural body type he has developed a way of being quite acrobatic and agile, especially in a fighting scenario. He has a supreme sense of balance and has a relatively easy time flipping, rolling, and jumping around objects. His skills with this type of activity is definitely higher than the average person. It works well with his fighting style.


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Jinchu was born into a farmer's family living just outside a town that produced some of the best harvests keeping the town full of food supplies and comfortable. With a farm large enough to supply a relatively high stock to the town there were obviously a good amount of hired hands working and since Jinchu grew up on the farm the only education he ever had in his early life were from his parents and these men. Even with all these people around to educate him in life there were very few things he learned besides tending cattle, bailing hey, other farming duties, and obviously the basics in living. By his fourth birthday he was only doing it for a couple months and there was no doubt in his mind that hated it. He didn't tell his parents though since he was proud to be their child. Farming was just so boring and slow to offer any fun. He began sneaking out at the age of six so he could get a touch some real excitement.

Soon after he began his little adventures he noticed that even in the town there was little excitement for him, and every night he made his way back home kind of sulking unsure if he had a place in his limited world. A year nearly passed without anything changing and he nearly gave up on his dreams of travelling somewhere and becoming some sort of hero, just belonging to where he was. One night was all it took to completely change his life around. The town that his farm was close to was undergoing an attack in the dead of night. Even from the farm screams could be heard, and it seemed like different forms of light and even flames were spouting out from the general town square area. The men living on the land instantly gathered make-shift weapons and farm tools and headed to the town. Watching his father go with them was all it took for him to sprint forward to follow. He heard screams from his father and other men to go back but Jinchu refused and sprinted even faster to make it to them.

The chaos they saw when making it to town was unsettling, there were people in the town square shooting stuff out of their hands. Jinchu had no idea what it was but he heard many from the farm say magic users with desperation and fear. Once they were noticed by these ‘magic users’ they began getting picked off one by one. With that happening Jinchu was very scared and found a place to hide while still being able to see what was going on. There was no calculation to how long the time went on… just bloodshed. At one moment Jinchu witnessed his father being cut down by a water-cased sword. Bursting out of his hiding-place Jinchu ran for his father crouching over top of him to save him from any more pain. The man with the water sword just laughed at Jinchu’s despair and after a moment of pause, made a downward strike to end the child’s whimpering. The only thing that saved him is the fact that his mother dove in the way… It turned out that after realizing Jinchu was missing she ran after him; only just making it there she had no other option but to protect her son. After seeing who it was who saved him Jinchu’s eyes went very blank and he sat there in shock for what seemed like hours of waking torment. The only thing the water guy did was let out a great laugh and repeated his strike down to wipe Jinchu away from the earth.

In one fraction of a moment his anger and fury was so overwhelming he threw his head back and made a deafening scream. With that scream, even as young and small as he was, Jin felt an overwhelming amount of power rush through him. He made a skyward punch coming in contact with the sword in mid-slash. In contrary to what was expected the sword shattered in a rather explosive way, sending shards flying, a couple slicing into the cruel mage. Jinchu was in a blind rage and kept punching aimlessly towards his foe in a complete assault. The man received many large wounds and crippling blows quickly falling to the ground from the unexpected onslaught of the previously defenseless child. He was crying and pleading for mercy from the rampage within seconds. The other men in the party just stared, kind of shocked at this new development. The last attack Jinchu made was to the ground, feeling the great power within him and splitting it to make a crevice that shot towards the direction of the rest of the gang. He began to turn tail and flee and the earth cracked with every step he took, daring any fool to follow and face his wrath. Either because he wasn't worth it, they were tending to their fallen man, or they genuinely were afraid of him Jinchu wasn't pursued that night.

For months he was roaming the country just trying to make it to the next town, just a vacant-eyed, dirty seven year old, whose hair was quite wild and unkempt at this point still with his mother’s splattered blood on his cheek. With this deteriorating appearance less and less people were making the effort to give him charity but it was because he never asked, his life seemed dependent on the people that would see him and offer food and water, he was lost, empty, and unable to be found. Finally on his travels Jinchu got to the point where he just collapsed unable get up or go on… at last defeated by his great misfortunes. These were the thoughts he had until he finally slipped away from consciousness. He swam in a pool of his own sub-conscious for what seemed like hours. Every moment he seemed to float away from the pain, the hurt and suffering, leaving the confines of the nightmares in the real world. He came across the thought that he was just going to give up, maybe go to meet his parents on the other side.

It was when he deeply desired to pass on when he heard a stern voice creeping within his head. It scolded him, chastised him and called him weak for giving up so easily. The voice was so familiar but he could never think of anyone who spoke to him in such an evil and cruel way, he was confused. He was awakened to the identity of this verbal abuser once he heard the last thing that was spoken, "you can't let this stop us." There was shock, his own mind was trying to bring him back from it all, taking the last resort in its struggle to live. Time went by where he figured out a few things within himself. He couldn't let his mothers' sacrifice be for nothing and he can't let himself disgrace his father by giving up. His eyes snapped open, he was in a bed, nothing fancy but it was warm, he felt the wet towel on his head and everything. A family had found him and had been nursing them as best they could, struggling to keep his fever down. He was a lot more cleaned up too, any ailments he suffered while unconscious quickly remedied themselves. It wasn't long before he left the kind family, greatly against their will but he had to move on, there were so many things he needed to learn and understand. He needed to live to the full range of possibilities and never stop moving up. A great future awaited him, all he needed to do was go and seize it.

Now years later, Jinchu is a young man and a powerful mage having discovered the essence of the magic he used on the darkest night of his life. He had gathered information and had learned it was a rather rare manifestation of Crash Magic, a magic very engineered for destructive and offensive purposes. Even after learning how to access his magic he realized quickly that now that he could trigger it, it was a dangerous responsibility to wield it. Until he could use it safely Jin primarily focused on hand to hand battling and training himself to be very mobile on a battlefield. With this came a style of maneuvering in acrobatic forms making him a dangerous adversary. He traveled all around meeting people and making friends even after establishing control of the his magical gifts. He wasn't by any means famous but he did have one true goal that he hoped would allow his name to reach the heavens, he was to become the strongest mage in Fiore, and all other lands in the world. His name would not just make it to the heavens, it would be known thoroughly there too, reaching the ears of his beloved parents that set the example for him so long ago.


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Post by Erik Cecere on Tue Oct 30, 2012 12:54 am

I will be reviewing this application upon Completion~

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Post by Jinchu on Thu Nov 01, 2012 8:25 pm

Alright, all finished ^^ BUMP!

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Post by Erik Cecere on Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:23 pm

Everything looks good, just one or two issues.

Your augment, Free Running. It never really specifies anywhere in your history that you developed such a skill. Working on a farm would give you a lot of physical strength but I think it would be best if you mentioned anywhere in his history that he developed his acrobatic or "free running" skills.

As for your history, it is of course ridiculous to assume that a child could punch a sword to pieces, so given the rest of the information in that paragraph I'm assuming this is a part of your magic? I would just like some clarity before I approve anything.

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Post by Jinchu on Fri Nov 02, 2012 8:53 pm

Alright some history on the free running development has been established in the last paragraph. And yes it has to do with the magic. I hinted at it in my last paragraph of history as well but now I made it more clear so we should be good there as well.

Anyways... BUMP!! ^^

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Ah yes, that's much better.

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